IN SEARCH OF YOU I MOVED ON,
SEARCHED YOU MIDNIGHT N DAWN;
SEARCHED YOU ALL AROUND,SEARCHED YOU EVERYWHERE,
SEARCHED YOU ALL MY LIFE ALBIET GOT TIRED RARE;
TOOK SHELTER IN A SERENE N SHADEFULL TREE,
REAL BLESSED & FELT SAFE IN THE LEE;
WAS ENOUGH DROWSY TO FALL ASLEEP,
HEARD A VOICE,N GAVE A THOUGHT SO DEEP;
IS THIS THE CALL I YEN TO HEAR,
IS THIS THE ONE STANDING BY NEAR;
HE OFFERED HIS HAND TO HOLD FOREVER,
IT WOULD REALLY HAPPEN I HAD THOUGHT IT NEVER;
HE TOOK ME IN HIS ARMS TO LOVE ME TENDER,
THE ELATED AMBIENCE WAS ABOUT TO RENDER;
A SUDDEN HUE PANGED MY EYES ,
I OPENED IT AND N SAW SUNRISE;
ANOTHER DREAM ,IT WAS IN SEARCH OF YOU
ANOTHER SUNRISE IT WAS IN SEARCH OF YOU..
3 comments:
sometimes in life, it happens , that the words coming out take the form of some lines. The lines which we call poem.
The lines may look simple and most of the time they are ,but to quibble them is foolish. These lines depicts our desire to reach far out in the sky. These lines, although made up of words but always go beyond the words. somewhere between the world we live in & the world beyond.
This poem shows such desire. desire to conversion.This personal soliloquize may seem as a poem but they it is the very desire that goes beyond the horizon. Somewhere between the stars.
This ur first poem that I have read & I cannot stop myself from quoting Walt Whitman THE POET JUDGES NOT AS A JUDGE JUDGES BUT AS THE SUN FALLING AROUND A HELPLESS THING.
I hope u understand it.
Altogather u have done a great work.
Keep it up. Bravo !
@amit
thanx for the plaudits..
good one. keep it up rainy :)
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